Your help and ideas are welcome ๐Ÿ™

Hello Google champions, would you please, based on your experiences, help me refine the following review? I have run out of ideas to refine it. Thanks in advance for your time and effort.

โ€œA fairly large and beautiful park in central Tehran. The park is located like a valley and is divided into different sections that have been given alphabetical names. Each section is then associated with an animal name that begins with the same letter. There are many places to sit and rest, and there are many places intended for picnics. The walkways in the park are surrounded by various trees and you can see different animal statues here and there. There are many playgrounds for children and various simple equipment for those who want to exercise.โ€

All the best

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Iโ€™m not sure what kind of help you need.

Maybe there are too many "many"s!

I often use an AI tool if I want the language to flow better. I normally use this free tool:

https://quillbot.com/paraphrasing-tool

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Hi Mr @I-am-Q
Is your first post is under restrictions ( I mean it didnโ€™t post publicly by Google!? ) if hereโ€™s your issues kindly confirm.. for being more specific..
But if itโ€™s just the checking of your paragraph before Post it ,I think you should consider the link provided by Mr @MortenCopenhagen ..
Thanks!

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Thanks @MortenCopenhagen , I will remove the repetitive word. Thanks for reminding :folded_hands:

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Hi @Laurent , yeah, no matter how I put my words, my review rejects being published publicly.

By the way, I am just curious, why should I post a note in this forum otherwise?

All the best

@I-am-Q
Iโ€™ve got youโ€ฆI think at this point thereโ€™s things you should know related to reviews and especially the guidelines and polices..
Here are some topics related to the case hope you could found things useful too ..
https://www.localguidesconnect.com/t/my-reviews-are-invisible-to-others-and-google-cannot-solve-it/481558/3?u=laurent

https://www.localguidesconnect.com/t/the-problem-of-my-comment-not-being-added-to-the-business-as-a-number/481513/7?u=laurent
And finally some guidelines informations by pics



Thanks !

As suggested by moderator @MortenCopenhagen sir, you should use any AI to rephrase or improve the review. I also do the same. @I-am-Q