Welcome to Connect.
There is no service from Google to get an edit checked.
I shared some tips here:
https://www.localguidesconnect.com/t/how-to-get-edits-and-new-places-approved/374518
I can not see all 5 data points you added in your last screenshot. But maybe the address you added was not precise enough.
Also, your amount of contributions could be an issue. With more experience you are likely to get a better approval rate.