However please note that this review is at the border of being an advertising of the hotel which may lead to the removal of the post. First of all I would like to ask to replace the first photo which is obviously not yours, here on Connect we encourage to post only proprietary photos (made by yourself). You can read more on How do I follow the original content guidelines on Connect and about the program rules.
Then I would suggest you describe your own experience and put a link to your review on Google Maps rather than provide explicit hotel info like the website and the telephone numbers which can trigger our spam filters.
You can edit your publication following the helpful instructions you will find here: Edit your post: Why and How.
more than welcome and thank you very much for removing the photo which was not yours.
About linking a review you need to open your contributions in Google Maps, and under Reviews you have a “Share” button on each review next to the Link button, this button will generate a link to that particular review.
After you have the link you can insert a URL here on a Connect Post by selecting the text you want to become a link and using the “Insert link” button in the comment editor, then you insert the Review link in the URL field of the Insert Link dialog.